SimoHDK
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Awesome. I came up with the following:
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I think this intro needs to be re-written, I'm convinced it just talks about video playback...I'd re-write it however I'm not sure what the manufacturer is trying to 'promote' the most.
Under point 7 theres an apostrophe in between the words which shouldn't be there
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There 'i' is missing from the word 'wire' for page 13
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Capitalisation issues - E.g 'Rear view camera' should be 'Rear View Camera' to maintain consistency. There's a few like this - (Date & time)
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What's with the 'EX>' under 'Loop Saving'?
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It says the blackbox uses a 12VDC power source + use a 12V power adapter, yet the specs on page 30 indicate the 'DC Adapter'(?) is 12-24v?
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Should say: (Add Summer Time / Daylight Savings Time) not (Add Summer Time - aka Daylight Savings Time)
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I think this intro needs to be re-written, I'm convinced it just talks about video playback...I'd re-write it however I'm not sure what the manufacturer is trying to 'promote' the most.
Under point 7 theres an apostrophe in between the words which shouldn't be there
Page 4:
There 'i' is missing from the word 'wire' for page 13
Page 5:
Capitalisation issues - E.g 'Rear view camera' should be 'Rear View Camera' to maintain consistency. There's a few like this - (Date & time)
Page 7:
What's with the 'EX>' under 'Loop Saving'?
Page 14:
It says the blackbox uses a 12VDC power source + use a 12V power adapter, yet the specs on page 30 indicate the 'DC Adapter'(?) is 12-24v?
Page 22:
Should say: (Add Summer Time / Daylight Savings Time) not (Add Summer Time - aka Daylight Savings Time)