Found a few things to consider, comments from others welcome:
Page 5, sidebar on right: "Beep Noises" should be "Beep sounds" or simply "Beeping". The word "noise" indicates an objectionable or unwanted sound.
Page 7, top right of box: Same as above
Page 13, in box: Same as above
Page 14, right column regarding "rotate 180 degrees":- change "hanging camera" to "mounting camera". Just sounds nicer like that.
Page 18: "By reading this manual you agree to give us your soul and happiness": LOL, what a sense of humor
A bit late to ask, but is "reset button" above flush where it could be activated unintentionally? It should be well-protected against unintended pressing when fumbling around with the cam.
Kudos on the clarity about the differences between "Main" and "Mode" settings which isn't clear with Mobius.
Is "Live Streaming" available ONLY to Android / Ios? If it's viewable to PC / tablet via wifi that should be noted as an additional feature.
Overall this is one of the clearest easy-to-understand manuals I've ever seen; very well done job with this too.
Phil